Okay, as the lead singer-slash lyricist for the band Last Minute, I'm kind of picky when it comes to our songs. It's the perfectionist in me, I tell ya.

Anyway, will you guys tell me what you think of these lyrics? I sort of envision them with a Drop Dead Gorgeous-esque sort of melody,like their song Dressed for Friend Requests, but not exactly like that and the stuff in parenthesis is meant to be screamed.
Tell me what you think, yeh?

The Escape

Let's go, let's go!
Purple meadows take me by surprise
Let's go, let's go!
Close your eyes
Let's jump into the sky

Somewhere in the streets a baby cries
My god, she sounds terrified
We need to run now
Before these fields pull us down
(So quick!) Close your eyes
Let's jump into the sky.

Let's go, let's go!
Purple meadows take me by surprise
Let's go, let's go!
We could still make this right
Quick take my hand
We'll jump into the sky
Let's go, let's go
Let's go, let's go
(Don't let go)

As she stands to the side with tears in her eyes
Arms held out in a fractured goodbye
(Fractured goodbye)
Standing there in tears and dressed all in white
She'll offer you poison with a heart black as night
(Black as night!)

Let's pray the clouds guide us through
Take a leap of faith
I'll be here for you
So quick! Before her shadow descends and decays
Let's jump into the sky
We have to escape